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5 pages for the essay, and 1 page for revision plan. Peer response I need write in class, so i need do it by myself.
For revision plan:
• Based on the peer response comments and your own plans for the essay, articulate a plan for revision. Pick at least two things in this essay that you plan to change. This could be, for example, a sentence for clarity, the elimination of a paragraph, or an area of the essay you plan to develop more fully.
• Once you have made a tentative revision plan, explain why you picked those areas of your essay to revise.
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